"The act of putting pen to paper encourages pause for thought, this in turn makes us think more deeply about life, which helps us regain our equilibrium."
-- Norbet Platt
Eyeshield21
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Eyeshield21 commented on the poem titled I stopped asking for sugar in my milk... by Saad El-Asha
Saad I gotta be honest with you. I have read your poem few times already but I still don't understand it. I am probably not sensitive enough to get your message. Could you expand or explain it?
Eyeshield21 commented on the poem titled A life lived for me by Sydney Malkauskas
I understand the sentiment and I think it's a good thought. I am not a native speaker so I can't correct little mistakes, but I is not i. And your free verse was a bit too free for me.
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Eyeshield21 commented on the poem titled Angels That Surround Us by Lonelyhearts1224
Hello there! I liked your poem pretty much. I'd like to think that there are these so called angels with us and hopefully I'll meet one someday :) .
The only thing that disturbed me is that...
The only thing that disturbed me is that...
Eyeshield21 commented on the poem titled Creeping feeling by Forgottendreamer
Hello there! I liked it there are good lines in it. My favourite : "Love is the destroyer of every educated mind".
But sometimes it didn't sound like a poem. I couldn't "feel" the rhytm. Overall...
But sometimes it didn't sound like a poem. I couldn't "feel" the rhytm. Overall...
Eyeshield21 commented on the poem titled All I Can Do by AbsentAuthor
Your poem had a great impact on me. I could fully understand what you wanted to say. Sometimes I want to cry too. Nice work,in my opinion.
