drewcarroll2

Heeeeee!!

That is the noise that happens in my head when I do something well and people praise it.

This is a lot of fun. I don't know where this writing will take me but I am really...

Parts 3 and 4 of my first attempt at writing

My first attempt at writing, it always turns into this dark kind of thing...

that is way better. See, I always get stuck in my flow. If I don't write it the way I think, it doesn't sound correct to me and then I just stop writing. It is a really bad habit. I think it...

Thank you.

This may sound silly, but with a sentence fragment like the one you mentioned, how do you keep the point you want to get across but make that grammatically correct?

I thought this was excellent, but I have to be honest, this is the first time I have critiqued anything. I didn't notice any of the things the other two posters noted.

I am partial to...

Thanks,

I'm pretty nervous to be doing this finally.

the drop down you suggested isn't popping up......

n/m.

Is there a way to delete this miss-post?

Critique:

This is my first go at story telling. For some reason everything I want to write about is dark and evil sounding when I put it down on paper.

    It had been a long time...

My first attempt at writing, it always turns into this dark kind of thing...