"It took me a long time not to judge myself through someone else's eyes."
-- Sally Field
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Dnavarre posted the poem titled Feet Pointed Forward
I was at a party this weekend, until I wasn't.
Dnavarre commented on their story titled In the Home of Beasts
Thanks for reading and your thoughts, Dickensonfan, I'm really proud of this piece! This is fantasy and "Odinseus" was just a name referring to Odysseus and Odin, just to give the impression of a...
Dnavarre posted the story titled In the Home of Beasts
I wrote this last year and surprised myself. Two girls in the woods.
Dnavarre started the discussion titled Stephen King's Misery
Finished "Misery" by Stephen King. I've only read 8 of his books but "Misery" is by far my instant favorite. It's painfully real, and not just for the plot, which is devoid of the supernatural but...
Dnavarre posted the poem titled Missing Missed Things
I haven't done one of these in a while. Will my style still have matured?
Dnavarre replied to the discussion titled Participation
If memory recalls, there are other critics here. Kerri, for one, Verm another...though none do as much as you Kt. I'm trying to pick up though--I've been horrible through the years.
Dnavarre commented on the poem titled Inhale, Focus, Exhale by kim271
Perhaps both.
Dnavarre commented on the poem titled Poeticentric Cognitive Therapy (PCT) by Jack
Hmm...maybe not meaningless now that there's meaning. Over my head, me thinks.
Dnavarre commented on the poem titled This Time... by kim271
Not much I can say here (you've stricken my silent--that's good).
There're two too many lines in the first stanza. Not sure what you could do about it.
There're two too many lines in the first stanza. Not sure what you could do about it.
Dnavarre commented on the poem titled Hands (warning risque) by flickeringfairy
When I read this I had a few hilarious images in my head. Especially when I read the word "obsessions."
And if this was meant to be serious, I'm terribly sorry.
And if this was meant to be serious, I'm terribly sorry.
Dnavarre commented on the poem titled Nightmare by kim271
Fairy got the technicals. The fourth stanza is out of place, seeing as how every line rhymes together. Whether accidental or intentional, it distracts and differentiates from the rest and should be...
Dnavarre commented on the poem titled Poeticentric Cognitive Therapy (PCT) by Jack
The fourth stanza confuses me, as I'm not sure what it portrays. The rest is well done, though in the end meaningless. Leaves me wanting more.
Submitted Writings
Feet Pointed Forward
A prose poem by DnavarreI was at a party this weekend, until I wasn't.
In the Home of Beasts
A general fiction story by DnavarreI wrote this last year and surprised myself. Two girls in the woods.
Missing Missed Things
A prose poem by DnavarreI haven't done one of these in a while. Will my style still have matured?
The Pacifist King
A fantasy story by Dnavarre1. The Torchlight Road
The Decision
A romantic fiction story by DnavarreTh
Masquerade
A romantic fiction story by DnavarreThis year's prom theme is a Masquerade, and it got me thinking.
G'northack the dwarf of legend
A general fiction story by DnavarrePart 1: G'northack's words
What Dreams are Made of
A science fiction story by DnavarreI wish I may, I wish I might...
Ab
A book section article by DnavarreChapter 1: Out for a Walk
Horseshoes and Hand Grenades: A Romance
A general fiction stage play script by DnavarreChapter 4: Noob Rush!
Horseshoes and Hand Grenades: A Romance
A general fiction stage play script by DnavarreChapter 3: All's Fair
Horseshoes and Hand Grenades: A Romance
A general fiction stage play script by DnavarreEpisode 2
