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Dex

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  • Joined: Mar 25, 2018, 5:50:25 AM
  • Last Seen: May 16, 2018, 2:27:33 AM
  • Preferred Language: en
  • Location: Detroit, MI

Biography

Avid and long time reader, mostly High Fantasy and Science Fiction with a mix of Mystery and YA Fiction.

I was fairly active on several RP boards/groups in my late teens, and after writing up a 10 page back story for my current Dungeons and Dragons campaign world I've once again become interested in writing again and getting all of these ideas in my head "on to paper"

I'm here to hopefully get some constructive criticism.
Seeing as I have no formal training outside of my public school education, I'm sure my writing is an absolute mess compared to a lot of people.

Regardless, I'm determined to get these ideas in my head out into the world, hopefully in a way people enjoy reading

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Dex commented on their story titled A Line in the dark: Rebirth of The Fallen Prince - ch.3-4
Apr 3, 2018, 8:45:29 PM
Separate speakers in separate paragraphs in dialog, got it.

I've been going over it from the top trying to cut down on the comma splices, missed punctuation, and missed capitalization. I've...
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Dex commented on their story titled A Line in the dark: Rebirth of The Fallen Prince ch.1-2
Mar 29, 2018, 12:29:53 AM
The server doesn't like me dumping all 5 chapters on it at once, so I'll be updating this in 2 chapter blocks for now. Hopefully I've managed to clean up most of the errors with grammar and...
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Dex posted the story titled A Line in the dark: Rebirth of The Fallen Prince - ch.3-4
Mar 28, 2018, 10:48:22 PM
A continuation of the tale of Grim and his newfound Fronge companions trying to save the galaxy from itself.
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Dex commented on their story titled A Line in the dark: Rebirth of The Fallen Prince ch.1-2
Mar 27, 2018, 8:47:12 PM
Thanks Alex. It's been over ten years since I last took an English class, so I was thinking my punctuation and sentence structure were going to be all over the place.

I think my best bet at...
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Dex posted the story titled A Line in the dark: Rebirth of The Fallen Prince ch.1-2
Mar 26, 2018, 8:19:32 PM
This is a tale of two intergalactic superpowers, and the many factions that lie within, locked in a now centuries old battle to control the universe. More specifically, this is the tale of one...
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Dex joined The Den
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A Line in the dark: Rebirth of The Fallen Prince - ch.3-4
A science fiction story by Dex
A continuation of the tale of Grim and his newfound Fronge companions trying to save the galaxy from itself.
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A Line in the dark: Rebirth of The Fallen Prince ch.1-2
A science fiction story by Dex
This is a tale of two intergalactic superpowers, and the many factions that lie within, locked in a now centuries old battle to control the universe. More specifically, this is the tale of one jovial drunk and his merry band of miscreants trying to put an end to this war, with as much beer and as...