"The unread story is not a story; it is little black marks on wood pulp. The reader, reading it, makes it live; a live thing, a story."
-- Ursula K. Le Guin
dark_angel
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dark_angel commented on the poem titled A Thousand Woes and then a Sigh by Jake
I love it. haha...I must point out that fine and sigh don't exactly rhyme....but I suppose we will call that poetic licence:p
dark_angel commented on the poem titled Winter by Routh
I like it, but I agree with Tsyni in that it is missing something that would take it to the next level. :)
dark_angel commented on the story titled Fall by Jake
I remember this story, although never in one sitting like it is now... more like several fragments, shared at random moments.
dark_angel posted the poem titled Sticks and stones
I'm a happy person, I promise :P
dark_angel posted the poem titled Flower Petals
okay, I know....very different from most of the stuff I write :P no stellar vocab in it either, but its pretty and I like it
dark_angel posted the song titled Ice Queen
written to a tune in my head, but sorta turned into a poem....based on the book "Torn Skirt" by Sue Godfrey
dark_angel commented on the story titled Ice Princess by Jake
All I can think when I read stuff like that is...wow! :D
dark_angel commented on the story titled Fell For You by truthserum887
I would agree with Tsyni in that it should be classified as a poem. I think that if writing poems with sad endings works for you, then go with it!
dark_angel commented on the poem titled A Dark Sunday Night by Mythbhavd
Beautiful rhythm! I also really like how you convey emotion in this poem. You make the reader feel that emotion...and that to me is what poetry is about! Great job!:D
dark_angel commented on the story titled You're the truth, Not I. by Jake
You manage to turn even the strangest things into a good storyB)Insanity at its best! :p
dark_angel posted the poem titled broken doll
i like most of it...any suggestions on how to improve the end would be most appreciated
dark_angel posted the poem titled addiction
an attempt at writing something deep and thought-provoking....this is what I got
Submitted Writings
Sticks and stones
A prose poem by dark_angelI'm a happy person, I promise :P
Flower Petals
A prose poem by dark_angelokay, I know....very different from most of the stuff I write :P no stellar vocab in it either, but its pretty and I like it
Ice Queen
An uncategorized song by dark_angelwritten to a tune in my head, but sorta turned into a poem....based on the book "Torn Skirt" by Sue Godfrey
broken doll
A prose poem by dark_angeli like most of it...any suggestions on how to improve the end would be most appreciated
addiction
A prose poem by dark_angelan attempt at writing something deep and thought-provoking....this is what I got
chokehold
A prose poem by dark_angel....?
Kiss goodbye
A prose poem by dark_angelI wrote this a few summers ago...not much, but it got me through
clouded vision
A prose poem by dark_angelanother emo-ish piece, inspired by a past relationship
Porcelain wrists
A prose poem by dark_angelSomething I wrote in one of my emo-ish fazes
