A wounded soldier discovers his injury is deeper than the shrapnel.
Daniel Harrison commented on the roleplay titled Jon Davis by Oxnard Montalvo
Sep 6, 2017, 7:13:54 PM
This is a great little scene. Rob Kosy has already mentioned the negatives. Like he said though, the intrigue you build by the end is almost as unbearable for the reader as I imagine it is for Jon...