contemplating commented on the story titled A fresh start by risuta
Dec 4, 2016, 5:18:35 PM
Who expect a letter from Monday? In the middle of reading I got an idea that this letter was sent from you to yourself. But I was wrong. Love your fresh idea!
contemplating commented on the story titled A fresh start by risuta
Dec 4, 2016, 5:18:17 PM
Who expect a letter from Monday? In the middle of reading I got an idea that this letter was sent from you to yourself. But I was wrong. Love your fresh idea!
contemplating posted the poem titled A Walk on Friday Afternoon
Dec 4, 2016, 12:54:43 PM
a free verse poem
contemplating commented on the poem titled Silence by Palupiskr
Dec 3, 2016, 4:26:40 PM
I'm sure most of people here agree with your expression. Put the bomb at the end, i love it.
contemplating commented on the poem titled The complicated girl... by Galuh Ayu Anggaratri
Dec 3, 2016, 4:21:48 PM
I ultimately love your thought at the first time I read it! How did you get such a thought tho. But I guess you can make it more 'poetic' by dropping some words like the subject or any other...
contemplating commented on the poem titled Vibes by stmufarrohah
Dec 3, 2016, 4:11:03 PM
So imaginative and suggestive, it let me picture some impression and reminded me to cherish my time. Thank you for making such a work!
contemplating commented on the poem titled To you, a person whom I love the most by Meesafiktri
Dec 3, 2016, 4:02:06 PM
It's soothing. Have you hand him this poem? I bet he would like it so much.
contemplating commented on the story titled Letter to My (ex) Lover by Feny F Dewi
Dec 3, 2016, 3:58:03 PM
I got the same idea with Palupi, it's a good start for song lyrics writing! Just saying. I like how you wrote it in details.
contemplating commented on the poem titled I Dance, Because I can by Saw233
Dec 3, 2016, 3:56:35 PM
So powerful, so firm.
contemplating commented on their poem titled #1
Dec 3, 2016, 3:27:27 PM
@Palupiskr Yay for another point of view! I'm stunned, you got the message. Now what to do. I'd never expected for people to understand the lines.
@hviturhiminn Well, free your...
contemplating posted the poem titled #3
Dec 3, 2016, 3:17:52 PM
(still) an analogy
contemplating commented on the poem titled That Lady by stmufarrohah