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common commented on the poem titled Angus 'n' Brothers by ewenart

Mar 18, 2015, 1:27:48 PM

I like the flow of this. Nicely done.

The subject matter also, war is a terrible thing, should be avoided at all cost.

Keep it coming.

common commented on the story titled Stupid Is As Stupid Does by pirate60

Mar 9, 2015, 6:12:00 AM

Nice stuff, Pirate.

common replied to the discussion titled Page Breaking Characters

Feb 25, 2015, 11:41:48 AM

The Ã‚Â¤ symbol I put at the top on an earlier version of the website to move my writing to the top of my list when looking at my own work.

This Ã¯Â¿Â½ is meant to be the closing part of a...

common replied to the discussion titled Hi there, new guy here with a question.

Feb 6, 2015, 9:56:32 AM

I'd say perhaps you need to involve all the characters together as one. By this I mean they are all in the same scene/setting etc. So they are all in a way viewing the same thing, they may just...

common posted the story titled That Sweet Nectar.

Jul 9, 2011, 2:41:56 PM

Chasing the sweet nectar that is...

common commented on the poem titled This Time... by kim271

Jun 17, 2011, 9:40:56 AM

Quite a heavy piece. You have written this well, it really shows the pain and thoughts one would go through in this situation.

Good work.

common commented on the poem titled Chicago by Laurie

May 20, 2011, 4:19:12 PM

This is interesting.

A few errors here and there that could use correcting.

Look off the doc a boat slumbers at the bottom. I think you mean "dock"

just one small example. But...

common commented on the poem titled Past the street where you live by flickeringfairy

May 16, 2011, 12:31:39 PM

I like this. It, for me, brings thoughts one would have for an ex perhaps.

Has a nice flow to it, great work.

common commented on the story titled Psycho Ward Pt.5 by NicoleSlendid

May 14, 2011, 4:45:33 AM

I enjoyed this. Has a nice flow to it and the same dark style of the previous chapters. Just feels it is missing a certain something.

Perhaps like kt said, needs some filling out. Hoping you...

common commented on the story titled Peggys Journal - Entry 2: James Allen Part One by boneyg

May 3, 2011, 10:44:41 AM

Another good piece BG.

common commented on the story titled Psycho Ward Pt.4 by NicoleSlendid

Apr 27, 2011, 11:34:47 AM

Another solid chapter. This is leaving me wanting to know more, that is for sure.

Keep up the great work, this is a great piece so far.

common commented on the story titled Psycho Ward Pt.3 by NicoleSlendid

Apr 26, 2011, 7:50:12 AM

I agree with boneyg, this is now getting somewhere. Really enjoyed the imagery on this. Spot on.

Do keep this going. Again, a few errors .

'I can't remember that last time I...