"I think the crucial thing in the writing career is to find what you want to do and how you fit in. What somebody else does is of no concern whatever except as an interesting variation."
-- James A. Michener
Chez-It
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Chez-It posted the poem titled Death
Just wondering why we care.
Chez-It posted the poem titled Fear
A habit of writing and the want for understanding. An epic fail.
Chez-It commented on the poem titled Sleepless night by twonite
This reminds me more of insomnia than anything else; though I presume that was not wanted ideal.
"The tip of the gun has a strange taste
Is this the taste of death"
A particularly...
"The tip of the gun has a strange taste
Is this the taste of death"
A particularly...
Chez-It commented on the poem titled silence by twonite
Short and sweet with a delightfully dreadful undertone...
"He wonders one thought
And spits it into the air"
Marvelous.
"He wonders one thought
And spits it into the air"
Marvelous.
Chez-It commented on the poem titled Only me by twonite
Truthful despair. I understand the emotion of this completely and fit it entirely befitting of how you have presented it.
Again nothing but to say but praise you.
Again nothing but to say but praise you.
Chez-It commented on the poem titled My story by twonite
Nothing much to say other than: beautiful.
This has a very delicate sentiment behind it and I respect it immensely. Nothing I could find to criticise. I did find the flow of it very amiable...
This has a very delicate sentiment behind it and I respect it immensely. Nothing I could find to criticise. I did find the flow of it very amiable...
Chez-It commented on the poem titled Live to Die by twonite
Dark and alluring are the only two words to justify this I think. Just a few suggestions:
"Because I'm really dead."
If you took out the 'really' it may flow much easier.
Also a...
"Because I'm really dead."
If you took out the 'really' it may flow much easier.
Also a...
Chez-It commented on the poem titled Her by twonite
I enjoyed this, though some of flow was a little disjointed I think it need not be improved upon. Nothing more to say than it is a splendid poem.
"I await the tears
They usually come
I...
"I await the tears
They usually come
I...
Chez-It commented on the poem titled Always and Forever by twonite
Amazing. That is this poem in one word. You have captured a very powerful emotion and portrayed it in perfect clarity. You have given it a superb mixture of demoralizing desperation, disturbing...
Chez-It commented on the poem titled Always by twonite
This one I love to pieces. You captured an emotion and identified all it's substance perfectly. The flow and rhythm in this was midly disjointed but it suited the purpose of this writing so it was...
Chez-It commented on the poem titled All that's Left of me by twonite
This is a very nice poem with a beautiful concept. A few suggestions though just for the sake of the flow and rhythm of the piece. Otherwise I have no objections.
"But now you love him
He...
"But now you love him
He...
Chez-It posted the poem titled Me & You - Opening Sentiment
Just something I wrote for someone special. He's my everything.
Submitted Writings
Death
A prose poem by Chez-ItJust wondering why we care.
Fear
A prose poem by Chez-ItA habit of writing and the want for understanding. An epic fail.
Me & You - Opening Sentiment
A prose poem by Chez-ItJust something I wrote for someone special. He's my everything.
Breathe
A prose poem by Chez-ItJust the truth of a very delicate moment; most probably decimated with words.
My Black Abyss (Incomplete)
A prose poem by Chez-ItThe world as I see it.
If I Knew You
A prose poem by Chez-ItJust a simple question with a complicated answer.
Humanity's Tale
A prose poem by Chez-ItThis started as a reflection of one particular person and morphed into a reflection of my society.
Obscured Sanity
A prose poem by Chez-ItMaking a castle with playing cards and this is what I found.
The Brazen Dawn
A prose poem by Chez-ItBrief contemplation of my favourite time of day.
Where Do I Lay
A prose poem by Chez-ItJust the trivial trials of those you found a love not true.
