"Substitute 'damn' every time you're inclined to write 'very'; your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be."
-- Mark Twain
Cath
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Cath commented on the story titled The Box by GHayward
I also enjoyed the story and would be reading a chapter two, if one were available. My main issue with the current story is that the last paragraph seems rushed. The rapist just drives off, crashes...
