"Creativity arises out of the tension between spontaneity and limitations, the latter (like the river banks) forcing the spontaneity into the various forms which are essential to the work of art or poem."
-- Rollo May
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Bstout89 commented on their story titled (Fixed)Angel Squad chapter 1
Ok thank you for the tip on paragraphs. I will take all the advice I get and try and make my next one better. Text chat is the hardest for me to catch. I'm so used to writing with it so I don't...
Bstout89 commented on their story titled (Fixed)Angel Squad chapter 1
Yea I do notice when I read my story I find the mistakes. But I end up changing a lot so I also hate reading it. The next chapter will be late In the middle of moving.
Bstout89 commented on their story titled (Fixed)Angel Squad chapter 1
Thank you guys for all of your feedback. I am truly happy to have found this website. I love hearing all of your feedback on my piece. I am also happy that it seems I have little mistakes to fix...
Bstout89 commented on their story titled (Fixed)Angel Squad chapter 1
Yea the two paragraphs are way too long. But I don't know how to really break them up. She is not really moving. She is just sitting around and wants to explain everything. I have been thinking of...
Bstout89 posted the story titled (Fixed)Angel Squad chapter 1
What would you do if all of a sudden your everyday life disappears and you are forced to fight for your life? Would you become a hero, become a villain, or would wait until someone saved you? Could...
