arumgumelar commented on the article titled Limiting the Usage of Social Media by Nurwanti
Dec 10, 2016, 3:20:46 PM
This shows which side you stand. And it is, in my opinion, to be balanced on both. To be honest, it is a safe answer. But deep inside, which one do you prefer? To live with or without social media?
arumgumelar commented on the poem titled the lucky one by J S
Dec 10, 2016, 3:13:09 PM
I think you can add more lines to make a more solid meaning
arumgumelar commented on the poem titled Irreversible Melancholy by Nurwanti
Dec 10, 2016, 3:10:30 PM
You really tried to put good dictions on this poem which is great. Exploring the feeling you have, I can tell
arumgumelar commented on the poem titled I Miss Him by yuly marina
Dec 10, 2016, 3:07:47 PM
Dictions you chose are not strong enough to express the feeling you have when writing this poem
arumgumelar commented on the poem titled He's the One by Feny F Dewi
Dec 10, 2016, 3:04:55 PM
Great rhyme this poem has. Last line I guess sort of tragedy when readers expect this poem tells about someone's lover
arumgumelar commented on the poem titled Doomsday by Pila Namhcar
Dec 10, 2016, 3:00:48 PM
You only tell about doom's day. In my opinion however, you don't make any strong points on your poem
arumgumelar commented on the poem titled In sum by Galuh Ayu Anggaratri
Dec 10, 2016, 2:58:34 PM
What a short poem and you got the point
arumgumelar commented on their poem titled Deadline
Dec 10, 2016, 2:54:52 PM
Thank you
arumgumelar commented on their poem titled Be Quiet
Dec 10, 2016, 2:53:54 PM
Thank you for your appreciation
arumgumelar commented on their poem titled I'm Sory, Thank You
Dec 10, 2016, 2:52:43 PM
Sorry I can't find any good diction to fill in the poem and make it better. However, I appreciate your suggestion. Thank you
arumgumelar commented on their poem titled My Story
Dec 10, 2016, 2:50:20 PM
Thank you for the compliments you both give
arumgumelar commented on their poem titled Stuck
Dec 10, 2016, 2:49:23 PM
It is that feeling when you stuck on something. I think everyone has the same experience at one point in their life, sometimes