Aidan F commented on the story titled the undercity by james
Sep 23, 2018, 12:02:15 AM
The plot was amazing, and so was the imagery. I believe that you do know how to spell, but you just do not have something to check your spelling. This issue is easy to fix. You can download...
Aidan F commented on the story titled Prologue by vannarose25
Sep 22, 2018, 11:09:09 PM
The plot for your Prologue is really good along with your imagery. There are only a couple of things that I see could be wrong with this writing. If you are writing a tween's story, describing the...
Aidan F posted the story titled The Murder in Leviskine
Sep 22, 2018, 10:27:39 PM
This is my first writing for this website. It is a short story that I originally wrote for school, but would like to receive feedback for it to improve my writing.
This is my first writing for this website. It is a short story that I originally wrote for school, but would like to receive feedback for it to improve my writing.