"Any book that helps a child to form a habit of reading, to make reading one of his deep and continuing needs, is good for him."
-- Maya Angelou
Ach
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Ach commented on the poem titled Wake Up My Imagination by moneygrubber14
Rather sad it left me after reading. But if a story touches your feelings, it's good!
I'm sorry I can not give you a rating. My knowledge of the English language is simply not sufficient enough.
I'm sorry I can not give you a rating. My knowledge of the English language is simply not sufficient enough.
Ach commented on the story titled Ascension by Ellisandre
It seems as if every possible feeling in a grieving process is described. Maybe shorten?
There is a paragraph about not believing in a life after death. But later in the story, she curses God...
There is a paragraph about not believing in a life after death. But later in the story, she curses God...
Ach commented on the story titled The Black Wolf 2 by Kardas
This does not read very smoothly, but after a few paragraphs it gets more easy. I personally found the first part better than the latter. Probably because the end became rather predictable...
Ach commented on the story titled KAT-BALLS by AlexScribe
Very well written, without unnecessary details. I have read this with pleasure.
Ach posted the story titled The Constable
3 pages of a light hearted romance. Constructive criticism is most welcome.
