11santa1 commented on their story titled Obsessed (Part 2)
Mar 19, 2010, 11:52:33 PM
This feedback is all very helpful guys thanks. The reason it doesn't sound great is because I am typing this just off the top of my head when I have time and submitting it without proofreading...
11santa1 posted the story titled Obsessed (Part 2)
Mar 15, 2010, 10:43:19 PM
Tobias is having troubles finishing his task.
11santa1 commented on their story titled Paper
Mar 15, 2010, 10:20:38 PM
Thanks :) I was sitting at home not knowing what to do so I asked my friend for a word off the top of his head and he said paper. So I wrote a short excerpt about it :)
11santa1 posted the story titled Obsessed (Part 1)
Mar 15, 2010, 10:16:08 PM
My first shot at a long story wish me luck ;) and comment. Tobias Quinn falls in love...or obsession there is a fine line and he's soon to cross it.
11santa1 posted the story titled Paper
Mar 14, 2010, 5:22:17 AM
A man is trying to get a job...
11santa1 commented on the poem titled I Have A Poem by yourotherhalf333
Mar 12, 2009, 1:38:06 AM
i like it!:)
11santa1 commented on the poem titled I Have A Poem by yourotherhalf333