Green Love

Tanka written by spaceboykokong on Tuesday 9, October 2007

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real happiness

Overall Rating: 90%

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Birds singing sweet songs, And the sun gives its pure love. Trees reach for the sky, And the wind blows its soft kiss. This is happiness indeed
   

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