Just Cry

Poem written by Taz_is_DYNASTY on Monday 9, December 2002

Member Avatar
Description
This writing has not yet had a description added.

Overall Rating: 80.2%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 80.2% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:80%
Imagery:81%
Spelling & Grammar:80%
Flow/Rhythm:80%
Vocabulary:80%
I just want to cry When I think of that guy I just want to cry When I ask myself why I just want to cry When I think of how he is to me I just want to cry Because of how he's choosing to be I just want to cry Because I'll never get him back I just want to cry Because of the happiness I lack I just want to cry Because I don't understand I just want to cry Because us I cannot mend I just want to cry Because I'm losing him I just want to cry I'm so afraid of the end I just want to cry I can't hold on anymore I just want to cry I wish things were as they were before I just want to cry There's a hole in my heart I just want to cry I don't know where to start I just want to cry I don't know what to do I just want to cry Because he'll never again say, I love you...
   

Post Comment

Please Login to Post a Comment.