Smile

Senryu written by Markdaps on Wednesday 5, September 2007

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A sad smile...

Overall Rating: 90%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 90% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:90%
Imagery:90%
Spelling & Grammar:90%
Flow/Rhythm:90%
Vocabulary:90%
Shape like a cradle. Likely to turn upside down The truth arises.
   

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    5-7-5 pattern jpon no ton? unsay difference sa senryu ug haiku?