The Battle

Sonnet written by fabellara01 on Thursday 23, August 2007

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war!

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A Battle has been lost But there was no war in sight A Battle has been lost And it was fought inside A Battle has been lost For this casualty speaks Of what his heart lacks Of what his heart leaks In his mind he attacks Yet his motions are weak A Battle has been lost A Battle has been lost
   

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