Helplessness

Poem written by fabellara01 on Thursday 23, August 2007

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the weakness in words

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With her presence, my heart is felt So much of this to exhale and release Yet there are no receptors to be seen For she hides the view of her world Her world that is in contrast to what she revealled and what I have seen In her shelter, in her corner, passive she remains, passive she becomes.. Helpless now I am.
   

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