woman under the sea

Poem written by fabellara01 on Thursday 23, August 2007

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oceanic

Overall Rating: 84.4%

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Concept/Plot:70%
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Flow/Rhythm:90%
Vocabulary:90%
Where has she gone? this woman from under the sea. has the tide swept her away? or be back another day? does she stay to where she belongs? when will you return? Oh, you woman under the sea.
   

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