Giving in to the infinite depths

Poem written by fabellara01 on Thursday 23, August 2007

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fell in too deep with the temptingly right woman in wrong timing, in the wrong order of things Normal? in which the society calls it but what can I do? giving into the depths in which there is rest weightless in silence, in stillness and in peace Patience, woman You are yet to be concluded
   

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