with someone else..

Poem written by fabellara01 on Thursday 23, August 2007

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envy..

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It pains me to see her with someone else.. in someone else's arms.. in someone else's mind.. in someone else's eyes.. will it be forever that you are lost from me? the whole world has collapsed from this view Whatever shall i do?
   

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