As Silence Kills

Sonnet written by fabellara01 on Thursday 23, August 2007

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straight forward anger

Overall Rating: 85%

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His heart wants to tell How your arms around him feels His heart wants to yell Yet this silence slowly kills How could you not tell? Your other love, the other thrill You have sent him to hell Damn! Can you not tell? To hell you have led him So falsely, he sees the illusion of heaven No worry, No regrets Pray for him as he slowly rests For the truth he knows His love for you will never show
   

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