"The Truth That Leaks"

Sonnet written by fabellara01 on Thursday 16, August 2007

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simple honesty

Overall Rating: 85%

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Flow/Rhythm:85%
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i go forth with this sightlessness the night is dark, i'm in distress the air sucks out the heat from me shiver and cold, it turns ugly good health i had back in those days my strength was strong in many ways now it is lost, i'm sick and sad it turns to worst from being bad so much we know, this love i showed in public eyes, silence, withhold too deaf to hear, too mute so speak my heart it bursts, it is too weak again, i am alone tonight will i give up? or take the fight?
   

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    It really starts to flow smoothly from about the middle down. I like it. You have a very distinctive writing style.