"The Bright Lights of the Night"

Sonnet written by fabellara01 on Thursday 16, August 2007

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the usual loneliness

Overall Rating: 76.6%

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Here I lay but you are away Soft words I say to make you stay There's more to come to where you're from Six shots of rhum, my heart goes numb Somewhere you roam, please come back home I'm all alone, so sad I've grown The air is cold, I need to hold Your love of gold, so far from old The moon I see, come share with me How hard I plea, it cannot be My thoughts run high, I wish not to cry 'Coz tears go dry, all this flies by Tonight, to date, I stay awake It's hard to take, this big mistake
   

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