"Sweet-tempered Inconsistency"

Sonnet written by fabellara01 on Thursday 16, August 2007

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simple love with haste

Overall Rating: 85%

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A hug today A touch away What love I feel All this is real Your look, I melt Oh, that I felt This kiss I taste Goes not to waste Sweet scent, I smell This love must tell Hush now, make haste For you I'll wait Same time, same place Same name, same face
   

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