"Womankind, So Sweet and Mild"

Sonnet written by fabellara01 on Thursday 16, August 2007

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female inconsistency

Overall Rating: 85%

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The womankind, so sweet and mild They're in my mind, not far behind Your womanhood, it is so good Obscurity, I understood Magnetic poles, attracts me so It is your role to draw me close You magnetize all in your sight Not dim but bright, they see your light Stop Newton's Law! there is a flaw! So pure and raw of what I saw Same poles attract, I can't react I halt! moved back, a heart attack These women kiss, so red their lips She's her's not his, she's her's not his
   

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