How Long Does It Take

Poem written by Freeman on Monday 13, August 2007

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hey how long before it happens or will it ever happen before he finds out i tried a few times that took more than a decade now your taking as long with him is there any point in even trying if it was to happen it would have happened by now just your threat of a visit it just won't happen
   

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