World of Hurt

Poem written by Sariel on Thursday 18, December 2003

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Overall Rating: 84.2%

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Concept/Plot:81%
Imagery:85%
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Flow/Rhythm:81%
Vocabulary:81.5%
As I drive the knife deep into my chest I can feel my heartbeat coursing Through the hilt. Beating Beating Faltering. My time grows short I leave this world of hurt. 10/05/93
   

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