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World of Hurt

Poem written by Sariel on Thursday 18, December 2003

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Overall Rating: 84.2%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 84.2% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:
Concept/Plot:	81%
Imagery:	85%
Spelling & Grammar:	92.5%
Flow/Rhythm:	81%
Vocabulary:	81.5%

As I drive the knife deep into my chest I can feel my heartbeat coursing Through the hilt. Beating Beating Faltering. My time grows short I leave this world of hurt. 10/05/93

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kt6550

5 days ago

Doing well, thank you. Have a humorous story almost ready to post and working on a sci fi novella.

Dnavarre

8 days ago

Kt! Hope you're doing well these days. Are you still writing about vampires?

kt6550

11 days ago

Good to have some of the old timers coming back. Of course, I never left.

Dnavarre

12 days ago

This dying fairy spends 2/3 of her single scene comforting the hero she's never met rather than reflecting on her own life or the woman she's been traveling with. Like, what?

Dnavarre

12 days ago

The ladies bother me. They're strong, capable, done so much...but when the protag, some random guy, is around they defer to him.

Routh

12 days ago

It's been a while since I read WFR, but yes it does. The first book is all about him and the reasons are apparent at the end. The subsequent books get much more into the other characters.

Dnavarre

13 days ago

Because I'm 80 pages into "Wizard's First Rule" and WOOOOOOOW does the world revolve around this protagonist

Dnavarre

13 days ago

What's everybody reading? How you feeling about it?

Don Roble

14 days ago

Glad to see some of the old gang back.

Madhatter

18 days ago

I haven’t forgotten about my fellow Denizens... life is crazy isn’t it? Hoping I get time to really stalk this page as usual. ❤️

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