Pondering

Poem written by Sariel on Thursday 18, December 2003

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As the sun Glints off the knife I think about what I am about to do. I wonder what the Ramifications Of my actions will be Does the very Soul of the Earth Cry out against it? I think I shrug I die. 10/16/02
   

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    JakeJake

    I really like the end of this one.
    Commented 16/11/2006 07:24