Paradox of feelings

Poem written by Sariel on Thursday 18, December 2003

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That word Love Shining, incandescent A paradox of Emotion. The greatest feeling The deepest fear Illuminates The farthest reaches Of our hearts Baring our souls No barriers No walls No masks Shows us as we truly are And leaves us open To the deepest continuum Of pain 07/31/02
   

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