Sariel's Untitled #5

Poem written by Sariel on Thursday 18, December 2003

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Overall Rating: 83.8%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 83.8% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:84%
Imagery:82.5%
Spelling & Grammar:92.5%
Flow/Rhythm:80%
Vocabulary:80%
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