Flying

Poem written by Sariel on Thursday 18, December 2003

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Overall Rating: 84.6%

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Concept/Plot:90.5%
Imagery:82.5%
Spelling & Grammar:82.5%
Flow/Rhythm:82.5%
Vocabulary:85%
Dont jump She screamed As I stepped into air. I close my eyes as the Bridge goes by I think I am Flying Until I hit the ground And sprain my ankle Welcome to Victoria. 10/06/02
   

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    The last line made me chuckle for some reason, haha...I don't know why. I guess it seems so absurd.