Scapegoat

Poem written by SomeLowLife on Thursday 19, April 2007

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Virginia Tech Massacre

Overall Rating: 91.2%

This writing has been rated by 3 members, resulting in a rating of 91.2% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:89.333333333333%
Imagery:91.666666666667%
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Flow/Rhythm:91%
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Scapegoat On April 16,2007 32 were gunned down By a new Smith & Wesson The shooter was dead The parents still mad Looking to blame something To make them less sad But they were confused Who was at fault? The Media seemed to have an answer Violent videogames, T.V., And Marilyn Manson! Everyone started pointing their Fingers And covering their Asses It seemed people forgot What even happened So if your having trouble Keeping your inner demons at bay Simply, take it out on others It's the American way
   

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    I like this. It's a confronting issue and a great satire.
    It's good. I don't agree with the last part, but the rest is all convincing. Thanks.