XTC

Poem written by Sariel on Thursday 18, December 2003

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Overall Rating: 84.2%

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Pupils expanded Sweat running Down my half naked body Gyrating wildly Glow sticks whirling Heart beating A mile a minute My peak hits me Like a bullet To the brain The time of My life In a convenient Pill form
   

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    this makes it easy to imagine what X would make me feel like... well done. btw i hate emo haha