My late night meets your early morning...

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My late night meets your early morning
and
we wonder how our exiles
embrace.
How dull can people be
when
they map exile
and
draw a blueprint for survival,
the what-to-do and what-not-to-do,
as though we fly like migratory birds with
fixed destination
fixed destiny.
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