In the circle of friends and companions... by Saad El-Asha

In the circle of friends and companions...

Poem written by Saad El-Asha on Sunday 8, May %23

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In the circle of friends and companions, You strive to break out of the crowd and listen. As with the bustle of feasts, you sit next to A pilgrim of the mind. The table now seldom carries the hardtalk of yesterday, Some opt for sheer company, Some seek the unquiet babe within. Follow the latter to the after-party drinks, They shall never condemn you when The crowd overcomes The pilgrim of the mind.

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