Bubbles, Bubbles

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Witches' strange and funny brews, Halloween poem.This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 90% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
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Bubbles, bubbles
burst thy troubles;
Grants thy wishes,
on the double.
A cauldron brewing
snails and bees;
Its gift, agility
to lift hulk trees.
A bear claw chain
with teeth of gators,
shall grant wealth, fame
or well~paid labor.
Blend parrot porridge
with white pigeon wings;
And with celestial tones,
thou shall then sing.
A kitty litter stew
with Dolphin fins;
Gem spankin' bright,
shall gleam thy skin.
Paste bunny tails
onto a rhino's horn.
This spell grants baby health,
when one is born.
Bubbles, bubbles
shall encase thy sorrows.
Consult thy crystal ball
so thou foresees tomorrow.
A n owl or rodent soup
with lion ears;
Shall hastily end,
nightmarish fears.
A skunk fur scrub
of Apple~cider;
Shoos, naughty spooks
of Hallo's Eve that tend to bother.
A loving heart,
with a forbearing soul;
Shall churn thy fondest dreams
to silver, gold.
Swan feathers sewn
onto torn ballet shoes;
Aids one in keeping close,
the beau thou choose.
A hairy mole
with long~sharp grungy nails;
Shall get thou noticed;
This mixture, never fails.
Bubbles, bubbles,
voodoo~dolls or Ju ju charms;
Incantations witches ooze to hex,
......... or free from harms.
Happy Halloween