You never “throw yourself” at a woman... by Saad El-Asha

You never “throw yourself” at a woman...

Poem written by Saad El-Asha on Friday 23, July %21

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You never “throw yourself” at a woman. She throws herself at you. This is how I was taught. So, the next time I assault a woman, I say she has been “asking for it”.

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2 comments

kt6550
Oh, my. If there are any feminists in here, you are going to be in a lot of trouble for this one.
Good luck.

- August 09 2021 22:36:29
Saad El-Asha
Oh, no, Kt. You have successfully failed to grasp the irony of what I was trying to say. I'm feminist AF By the way, "feminist" here means decent, regardless of ideology.
- August 11 2021 20:06:02

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