"All I Need is a Moment......."

Poem written by mooshiez on Thursday 8, March 2007

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Just a moment......

Overall Rating: 96%

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"All I need is a moment......." All I need is a moment of your time, To bleed these empty feelings of mine. This may come to be something you'll never know, Or a moment in your life, you can't ever let go. To some this is old, but it's new to me, Like all days, today will soon be a memory. Like all memories with specific decent, They become nothing more than a brief moment. Like the time you've learned to ride a bike, I can't remember what that must have been like. And the day you found out your first crush liked you, How eager you were to find the truth. Or the time you've had your very first kiss, Some can't remember and some will always miss. And the time puberty and adolescence broke through, Where feelings changed, and no one understood you. Or the very first day of your high school career, Some ended in laughter, and some ended in tears. And prom night, where life promises were made. Some promises faded and others have stayed. Or the day you moved out of the house you called home, Some went to school, had babies, and some left alone. And the day your true love broke your heart, After promising forever, and never being apart. All of these days felt like something may last, But we all know even tomorrow will soon be the past. Some take their lives as nothing but heartache and sorrow, But they fail to realize that today is yesterday's tomorrow. So while you read this, as I reminisce and vent, You will come to realize, that this too is nothing more than a brief Moment. Tara N. Smith©2007
   

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    This is incredible! "And the day your true love broke your heart, After promising forever, and never being apart. All of these days felt like something may last, But we all know even tomorrow will soon be the past." Pure genius! (:
    "TODAY is yesterday's tomorrow" this is just amazing i absolutely love it
    Gave you a 100... So nice and simple everybody has to relate to it. Keep it up hope one day I get away with one like this.... Congrats!! good job.