"Yesterday"

Poem written by mooshiez on Thursday 8, March 2007

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Broken love can totally make you feel.......(you fill in the blank)

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"Yesterday" Yesterday is over, a new day to arise, I no longer feel your hands, I no longer see your eyes. You no longer hold my dreams, In my heart, you cannot stay, That part of you has past upon The time of Yesterday. Tara N. Smith©2007
   

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