The Great Equaliser

Poem written by IndecentAccident on Monday 14, September 2020

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The only thing that makes us equal

Overall Rating: 86.7%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 86.7% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:87%
Imagery:84%
Spelling & Grammar:81.5%
Flow/Rhythm:93%
Vocabulary:88%
I may be down Have a life that's tough Cold, hungry and sleeping rough You may be up VIP with the stars Fancy house and flash cars But some day you'll be down Dust and bones underground Just like me You may be down Built with broken parts And a stone cold heart I may be up Laughing, joking and singing All good when I'm winning But some day I'll be gone Forgotten when life goes on Just like you
   

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    #1

    kt6550kt6550

    How true. Well done.
    Commented 25/09/2020 22:29
    #2

    Lonelyhearts1224Lonelyhearts1224

    Powerful words in stanzas, fabulous job, thanks for the read; Smile
    Commented 05/10/2020 11:30