The Great Equaliser

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The only thing that makes us equalThis writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 86.7% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
Concept/Plot: | 87% |
Imagery: | 84% |
Spelling & Grammar: | 81.5% |
Flow/Rhythm: | 93% |
Vocabulary: | 88% |
I may be down
Have a life that's tough
Cold, hungry and sleeping rough
You may be up
VIP with the stars
Fancy house and flash cars
But some day you'll be down
Dust and bones underground
Just like me
You may be down
Built with broken parts
And a stone cold heart
I may be up
Laughing, joking and singing
All good when I'm winning
But some day I'll be gone
Forgotten when life goes on
Just like you