DescriptionSome thoughts I've had when feeling low.
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We were standing in the rain, Nobody could see my pain. My eyes were red, I just wanted to go to bed. Every second of life hurt, Completely soaked was my shirt. Didn't know if it was, My eyes or the clouds. My vision seemed to blur, As I shuddered. As I cried and cried, Rain made my tears hide. I wish it would rain often, Or I could hide in a coffin. For the pain is constant, And I don't want this punishment. Sucks to be me, A joke this used to be. But until recently, It has become my reality.