Beautiful brown eyes
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When I look into his eyes, The world ceases to exist, Those beautiful brown eyes, Have me mesmerized. Time loses meaning, Worries melt away, Those beautiful brown eyes, Make me sway. Happiness fills me, As i further drown, In those beautiful brown eyes, And forget my frowns. I feel hypnotised, I feel magical, Those beautiful brown eyes, Of that beautiful Angel. Words cannot describe, How thankful I've been, To look into those eyes, That looked back at me. Time loses meaning, I feel I'm in a trance, At those beautiful brown eyes, I need to glance. They make my day, They make me free, In front of those eyes, I am truly me.