Everyday

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just a (what i think is) a poem i thought offThis writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 98.8% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
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I wait patiently, everyday.
I stay up late at night, no answer.
I hold in the anger,the rage, the hate.
I speak but no one listens.
I laugh but no one understands.
I look upon the view, people walk on by.
I stand upon the view, suddenly they care.