Today, I write to you as an outsider...

Poem written by Saad El-Asha on Friday 10, January 2020

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Today, I write to you as an outsider to the nights in which you have shared your fears. Tonight, I shall be the harbinger of those fears Unawares. Bewildered, we may vanquish those fears and sell them to a growing market, When dreams of the future are finally awake.
   

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    Hmmmmm...... "When dreams of the future are finally awake."

    Try "Where dreams of the future are finally awake." or
    "When dreams of the future awaken."
    At first, I'd opted for your first suggestion, then wrote it the way I wrote it. Now I know I should have. Smile