Assumption and Reality

Critical Review written by Karan Sharma on Sunday 15, December 2019

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Difference between assumption and reality.

Overall Rating: 70%

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Assumption and reality has been two aspects of a human life. Which helps in developing thought process in every individual with different ethnic, cultural, social and financial status. Reality has always been very difficult to be accepted by most of us. In contrast assumption has always been an easy thing to accept in comparison to reality. Though assumption being an easy way of setting our thought process,it has the power to concieve our ego with the falsehood of temporary happiness. Which eventually us permanently frustrated due to our bloated ego. We all have different mindset with some sort of capabilities. But most of us don't utilise for the sake of feeding our ego and be in the illusionary world of fake happiness created by our assumption of getting eternal happiness. On other aspect people who get successful by utilising their talent in various capabilities have got into the trap of false ego to prove their superiority towards weaker people and also against their circumstances. Never realising that the negativity of false assumption and ego creates a negative thought process in mind along with their character also.
   

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    You need to find out how to write clauses.


    Assumption and reality has been two aspects of a human life. Which helps in developing thought process in every individual with different ethnic, cultural, social and financial status.

    Assumption and reality has been two aspects of a human life which helps in developing thought process in every individual with different ethnic, cultural, social and financial status.

    As soon as you got to "which" you were writing clause and not ending a sentence. You do this time and time again.

    Your sentences are far too long.
    I agree with Don's comment. Perhaps you would gain more from reading and commenting on other members submissions and engaging with the community. Smile
    Don Roble , I would really like to appreciate your feedback. It will certainly help me to improve my writing.
    Karan, I mean for you to become a better writer. I'm a hard judge of writing. I know the good from the bad. I know that the thought is only part of the writing. There are methods that work and methods that don't. The rules never change. Every writing starts with readability. Lacking that and all you have a wall of words.

    Keep writing no matter what anyone says. Write whatever way you can. Learn to write properly and you can edit.

    You show a good attitude. I have have writing shredded. It was done nicely but the shredding was still done. It's very easy to read past your own mistakes. You simply don't see what someone else sees.
    Well, now, everyone jumped on your case without recognizing a cognizant fact. English is not your first language, and that is intuitively obvious and painfully clear. Cool

    That said, there is an excellent argument in here that is masked by your English. Now, you need to get someone to help you. This needs a good, hard edit. Sentences need fixing and you have to break this into paragraphs.

    If you need help, this is where we live. Don't be afraid to ask.