Alive

Poem written by Yours truly on Thursday 28, November 2019

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I was alive I had a soul I had a life Until I was sold I was sold To your anger I was sold To your laughter I was sold To your taunts I was sold To the burns The burns That sheds light my way To the thoughts of you going away Going away To another day Another day I stay Another day I die Another day I cry Another day You smile
   

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    Almost lyrics. Needs a bit of punctuation.

    Two good first posts. Now, you have to start reading other folks posting. Cool
    this is very passionate, and very much relatable. good job