When we were ill...

Poem written by Saad El-Asha on Tuesday 19, November 2019

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When we were ill, the doctor asked us to open our mouths. When our cars died, we opened their bonnets. We open that which needs opening where things are represented best, warts and all. Only in laughter we embrace grief.
   

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    How true!
    Punch in the last line, yes it's true.
    Thank you, guys. This warms my heart.
    Deepness